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*a black heart drowning in euphoria*

True Joys (Remake from an Actual Conversation)

(This is a remake of excerpts from an actual conversation written hereafter.)

I want relaxing joys…
Joys that aren’t achieved over tremendous pressure.
I want joys that come in peace,
in kindness freely given,
in love…
in real love…
or in honest hate overcame…

I want joy that does not demand,
a price or a sacrifice…
Such as the joy transcending from an existence…
For otherwise, I am bountiful.

I want so fondly, this plain emotion
gracefully finding its way
through our converted jungles and savory hollows…
riding nothing but time…

I want relaxing joys…
That would transpire for a second
to affect your whole life…
with love…
with real love…
until you can hate no more…

(Excerpts from an actual Conversation:)

I want relaxing joys…
Joys that aren’t achieved over tremendous pressure.
I want those that come in peace,
in kindness freely given,
in love….
I want joy that does not demand a price or sacrifice…
I want that plain emotion from time to time….

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3 responses

  1. This is so honest and straight forward that it’s beautiful. The narrator truly exposes his or her inner feelings in a modest and beautiful way that not many people can.

    15.12.2011 at 13:52

  2. Hello, Thank you for the ‘like’. I read your poem and ‘unqualified love’ came across..then I thought..’get a puppy or kitten’..truly..when one loves..finds disappointment in expectation from humans..my ‘cat woman’ Kuala Bear..a friend to my wife and me for over two decades..helped me..we loved her so much..we learned so much..Peace Tony

    15.12.2011 at 20:54

    • thanks for the suggestions. It’s nice to hear about your cat. I’m a dog person though and have detached myself from pets. When they die, or when you have no time for them coz you have to make time for people, it also hurts. I wrote “True Joys” long ago and by now I can truly say that I’m just a hairline away from the state where I can “hate no more…”

      16.12.2011 at 02:36

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